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©2007-2009 ~MrBadger
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When you find that once again you long
To take your heart back and be free
If you ever find a moment
Spare a thought for me

We never said our love was evergreen
Or as unchanging as the sea
But if you can still remember
Stop and think of me

-Andrew Lloyd Webber's Phantom of the Opera
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Not sure if I want this design to be part of the quote series. This poster was more of an experiment than anything. The quote is not supposed to be read straightforward and is purposely in kind of a messy pattern. The more mportant words are really in the middle section where "stop and think of me" is located.

The quote is about love and is really just about just stopping and thinking about the one you love whenever you can.

Stock background textures are from ~bashcorpo and ~zombiestock.

Please critique and let me know what you think. I would love to know what is good and what could be improved since this was just an attempt at something different. I would greatly appreciate it! :-)

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:iconumboody:
You know what I'm gonna say, so I won't bother saying it. +fav!

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:iconmrbadger:
Hahaha and I will always appreciate it. Thanks again! :-)

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:iconthespacebetween7:
Joey, these really are creative! All of them! I really like this one too. You're a very talented young man! :)

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:iconmrbadger:
word...:-)

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:iconerror-message:
nice..... I'm getting inspired

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:iconmrbadger:
Thank you, and I'm happy to know that I could inspire you. :-)

Do you have any suggestions for this piece?
I would really love to know if this is heading in a good direction.
As I stated in my comments on the piece, its more of an experiment.
If you could provide some criticism, that would be great.

Once again, thank you for the comment!

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ummm I really don't have much to criticize about the piece. I can't really comment on what came straight form your soul.

........... but as I pay closer attention to it, I like what you did the word " unchanging " also with " remember still ". those words seem to have a much more interesting relationship then the others. I would say to maybe experiment on that....play with it, then see how it makes you feel. you could also try and see how the piece would change if you were to tighten up some of the spacing in between words.....just to kind of continue with the experiment.

hope I helped. lol

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:iconmrbadger:
Hey thats exactly what I was looking for.

I wish I could receive comments like that from other people on my other pieces haha. All I need is some critiquing on my work just so I know if there are any errors I missed and if there are any technical issues I could tweak.

Thank you for that comment, and yes...you helped haha.

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anytime man..... I expect you to do the same for me too! lol

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